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Old 12-21-2010, 01:42 PM   #192
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Whoa...totally missed this last night. Bad Spacey!

Great chapter as always, although now I don't trust anyone, and two typos for me this time

“I wouldn’t worry too much about her finding her if you want to avoid her,”
Should be "her finding you" or just "...about finding her"?


Hard to quote without giving stuff away, suffice to say the last sentence has an extra word...(It's "how" )
Originally Posted by Sanford Rubenstein
Clearly toilets are supposed to flush, not explode
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