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Old 12-21-2010, 02:42 PM   #192
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Whoa...totally missed this last night. Bad Spacey!

Great chapter as always, although now I don't trust anyone, and two typos for me this time

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“I wouldn’t worry too much about her finding her if you want to avoid her,”
Should be "her finding you" or just "...about finding her"?

And:

Hard to quote without giving stuff away, suffice to say the last sentence has an extra word...(It's "how" )
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